Rosa Bui
Professor Talusan
English 2: Asian American Experience
17 May 2007
Literary Analysis
While completely different in style and technique, the Oracles and American Born Chinese present strikingly similar protagonists and their character developments. Both characters face an identity crisis, traveling on a journey of similar internal conflicts. Essentially, both works convey the same theme of self-acceptance. However, the authors, Pati Poblete and Gene Yang, employ many different literary techniques to achieve this. Ultimately, Yang succeeds in creating a greater effect on readers. The reader is surprised and struck by the realization of the futility in morphing and transfiguring oneself, whether internally or externally, into someone one is not. Yang’s twisted comic, humor, subtle details, and overall creativity better emphasize this point and impact his audience.
In the Oracles, Pati struggles with the Oracles’ expectations and influences. She finds her life in
In American Born Chinese, the protagonist Jin Wang harbors so much shame in being Chinese, that he repels Wei-Chen, his cousin Chin-kee, and even revels in his transformation into “Danny”. He resents Wei-Chen and Chin-kee because they represent the very things he hates about himself. They not only embody stereotypical Asian physical features but also Asian attitudes and behaviors. When Wei-Chen first arrived, the first thing Jin thought was “‘Something made me want to beat him up’” (Yang 36). Moreover, when Melanie, his crush, asserts that she just wants to remain as friends he immediately claims “‘I’m not like [Chin-kee]….I’m nothing like him! I don’t even know how we’re related!’” (Yang 101). Even when Melanie explains that it is simply a matter of not jeopardizing their friendship, Jin is convinced that his Asian cousin is the reason. When Wei-Chen reaches out to Jin saying “‘We’re brothers, Jin. We’re blood’” (Yang 190). Jin responds “‘You have got to be kidding. You and I are not alike. We’re nothing alike…Maybe I think she can do better than a F.O.B. like you’” (Yang 191). The thought of being a “F.O.B.” scares Jin because it implies that someone does not belong in the greater community. The inability, to fully assimilate and be seen and treated as more than just an outsider who came from a little boat, terrifies him. To Chin-kee, he says “‘I’m sick of you ruining my life, Chin-kee! I want you to pack up and go back to where you came from!” (Yang 205). Living in a predominantly Caucasian surrounding, Jin can not come to accept his identity as an Asian. His confusion prevents him from approaching his crush; it also drives him to change his straight Asian hair into a more Caucasian style, making him look much like a “‘broccoli’” (Yang 99). Later on, he agrees to discontinue seeing Amelia simply because Greg told him to. The inability to embrace his ethnicity is the source of many of his insecurities.
Therefore, both protagonists travel similar journeys. Their tragic flaws are their reluctance to grasp and cherish their cultural identity. They both begin as insecure characters, questioning their ethnicity and repeatedly attempting in every way to escape the culture which haunts them. Pati experiments with many things such as drugs and sex against her family’s disproval. Jin shuns people he sees himself in and hides under the façade of Danny. But ultimately, both become round characters because of their final epiphanies. In the end, Pati realizes how the Oracles have become guides, “passing [their] ‘life skills’ onto [her]” (Poblete AsianAmExperience Blog) and helping her appreciate her own culture and identity. She learned much from them which led to “the richness of [her] childhood…and the discover[ing] of [her] roots” (Poblete 122). On the other hand, Jin learns that being oneself is how one will find genuine happiness.
Pati Poblete, narrator, author, and protagonist, relates her internal conflicts through memoir writing. She writes in first person, revealing all her personal thoughts and feelings, whether it is frustration, relief, excitement, or sadness. Although the point of view is third person limited, her internal struggles, experiences, and journey are especially highlighted through her voice and retelling of her own story. She perfectly captures the significant times throughout her life. Reading the memoir truly felt as if Pati herself is present and retelling her story as in a conversation. Compared to an autobiography, this memoir easily stimulates attention and sympathy.
Additionally, Poblete is able to use setting, imagery, plot development, conflict, characterization, foreshadowing, flashback, and irony to her advantage. The imagery, her description of settings, and plot development are personal yet vivid as if the events had just occurred yesterday. Many instances exist where Poblete foreshadows events or leaves a cliff hanger. One is that of her Grandma Patricia’s practice of voodoo on Pati’s mother. Her use of monologues as an introduction to each of her characters and through her own voice, Pati develops her own character as well as each of her family members. Moreover, the inclusion of her present thoughts and feelings as well as those in retrospect, simultaneously add more definition to her character development and therefore her theme of self-acceptance as a strength and source of growth (Poblete AsianAmExperience Blog).
Gene Yang chooses a completely different method of conveying his theme. American Born Chinese is a comic, full of graphics, boxes, and bold words. By creating this comic, Yang is able to employ a variety of techniques, both literary and non-literary. The graphics, including the boxes and texts, convey many ideas, actions, emotions, and events. They also symbolize, mirror, parallel, and emphasize certain main points and occurrences. Additionally, the colorful pictures capture and hold readers’ attention, entertaining them with humor and art. Therefore, American Born Chinese stands more vivid than Poblete’s descriptive words. Even a reviewer claims “True to its origin as a Web comic, this story’s clear, concise lines and expert coloring are deceptively simple yet expressive. Even when Yang slips in an occasional Chinese ideogram or myth, the sentiments he’s depicting need no translation. Yang accomplishes the remarkable feat of practicing what he preaches with this book: accept who you are and you’ll already have reached out to others” (Publisher’s Weekly). Another reviewer says, “Yang’s crisp line drawings, linear panel arrangement, and muted colors provide a strong visual complement to the textual narrative” (Library Journal).
“Graphic novels that focus on nonwhite characters are exceedingly rare in American comics” (Library Journal). Most importantly, his comic is fiction while the Oracles is nonfiction. This allows Yang many opportunities to strengthen his theme to his own liking. He uses allusions to a well-known Chinese myth, personification, anthropomorphism, direct dialogue, and dramatic irony. He is able to exaggerate and create things to better deliver his theme whereas Poblete is confined to telling the truth as it is. For example, Yang can easily create and name characters such as Chin-kee to reinforce his emphasis on stereotypes. His fake Chinese accent, “ ‘Rong time no see! Chin-kee happy as ginger root pranted in nutritious manure of well-bred ox!’” (Yang 49) also contributes to the stereotypes that Jin desperately wants to dissociate from himself. His manipulation of time frame also works effectively in that it indirectly symbolizes the persistence of the problem of ethnic identity crisis and self-acceptance. Fiction allows Yang to defy time and connect an ancient and modern story. By combining both stories, Yang reinforces his point in both the major and minor character. He is able to employ juxtaposition because both the Monkey King and Jin are foils, struggling to accept their true forms or selves and suffering as a result. In the end, both revert to their original selves, proving the foolishness in trying to alter one’s true identity. Yang’s ability to create his own plot and fantastic events such as Jin transforming into Danny strongly contribute to his message of self-identity. It is also easier for Yang than for Poblete to utilize symbolism. One symbol in the comic, for instance, is the transformer toy, which represents Jin’s desire to completely morph himself into something “greater”. It reappears as Wei-Chen’s parting gift from his father which “ ‘transforms from monkey to humanoid form. Let it remind you of who you are’” (Yang 217). Also, although both works have a light humorous tone, Yang is able to have a lighter tone and therefore more powerfully highlights the serious underlying issue.
Although some may say Poblete’s the Oracles, leaves a greater effect on the readers because it retells a true and realistic experience, this resulting effect is outshined by the effect resulting from the creativity and twist of Yang’s American Born Chinese. Because everything seems disconnected, American Born Chinese’s ending is more powerful when all the themes, characters, and conflicts merge. The theme becomes an epiphany to the reader as all the comic’s elements converge. “Their stories converge into a satisfying coming-of-age novel that aptly blends traditional Chinese fables and legends with bathroom humor, action figures, and playground politics” (Library Journal). In the Oracles, the build-up of the effect, especially towards the end, is not as effective as Yang’s strategic climatic ending. The fantasy elements of Yang’s story not only allow him to exaggerate his theme but also to entertain readers throughout the comic. Each piece of literature should change by its ending and while both works do this, the transformation of American Born Chinese is more shocking, and thus has a greater effect. The plot and the character development surprise the unsuspecting readers and therefore prompt their reflection. Pati develops her character through retelling a story. Meanwhile, Yang develops his character through unexpected, action-packed, and warped events. As a Booklist reviewer asserts, “Yang helps the humor shine by using his art to exaggerate or oppose the words, creating a synthesis that marks an accomplished graphic storyteller. The stories have a simple, engaging sweep to them, but their weighty subjects — shame, racism, and friendship — receive thoughtful, powerful examination” (Booklist). In this way, the effect on the readers is more unique.
Perhaps the natures of the two genres also affect the impact on the reader. While the memoir primarily serves as a therapeutic and reflective means for Pati, the comic focuses on proving a point to readers. Where Pati Poblete has already made an explicit conclusion in her memoir at the very end, Yang leaves the reader more freedom to think, interpret, and explore the events of his comic as they unite and end in one single picture. In both cases, the two works stand as important pieces in Asian American literature that prove extremely pertinent in the complex world of today.
Works Cited
“American Born Chinese Reviews.” American Born Chinese Reviews. 2006. First Second. 15
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“March 13 Read the Oracles”. AsianAmExperience Blog. 2007. experience.blogspot.com>. Poblete, Pati Navalta. The Oracles. Yang, Gene Luen. American Born Chinese.